OK. You've certainly got sufficient and appropriate examples of the attributes and attitudes required by employers. However, you need to explain, for each attribute/attitude, why they are valued by employers.
OK Zaka, this now meets the pass criterion. Please though check the SPG. There are a number of errors in it. It doesn't support a claim for M2, which is about proofreading and reviewing your work, if there are too many spelling, punctuation and grammatical errors in it. It might also be a good idea to rename this page. The name should reflect the content of it rather than the tool you've used to present the content. Imagine if every book was called "Book".
OK. You've certainly got sufficient and appropriate examples of the attributes and attitudes required by employers. However, you need to explain, for each attribute/attitude, why they are valued by employers.
ReplyDeleteI made the changes and make sure that you click the single attitudes/ attributes to see the detail about it.
DeleteOK Zaka, this now meets the pass criterion. Please though check the SPG. There are a number of errors in it. It doesn't support a claim for M2, which is about proofreading and reviewing your work, if there are too many spelling, punctuation and grammatical errors in it. It might also be a good idea to rename this page. The name should reflect the content of it rather than the tool you've used to present the content. Imagine if every book was called "Book".
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